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Astrid M.


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  • Astrid M. 31/01/2006 22:22

    Hi Robert, Jaime, thank you very much for your suggestions to my picture... I have to admit that I do have Photoshop... but have to learn to better work with it :) I like much to read more of your comments that I can improve my work !
  • Jaime Crystal Attenborough 30/01/2006 22:55

    great idea and beautiful pose and model, but i think the photo overall is too dark.
    you could fix things as robert said, but i think a bit more light and this could be a winner
    J :)
  • Robert Riley 30/01/2006 21:18

    Astrid this is a good shot. Composition etc. It could be improved immensly in Photoshop. It could be improved immensely in the taking. The background is distracting, lots of creases, and too near the model. The focus could be better.

    I have taken too many pics that nearly make the frame but dont. Keep up the good work.