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mk.pixelstorm

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Pour cette photo, mk.pixelstorm désire collecter le maximum de commentaires constructifs Aidez-le avec des conseils sur la composition, la technique, le langage iconographique etc. (Veuillez respecter la Netiquette!)

Prisma-photo 06/01/2019 12:19
Welcome on FC !
I take the opportunity of your feedback request to propose you my inputs on this photo.
I like very much the idea and its realization. Great lighting on your beautiful model and interesting toning + textures.
I am however disappointed by the disturbing background : the poles, the houses,... I would probably have considered a lower point of view and / or cropped the upper part of the image. It is leading to lose the sky, which is nice, but I believe this would make a stronger image empowering your model.
Regards,
Prisma
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- mk.pixelstorm 08/01/2019 7:49
  Thank you very much for the time and effort to tell me your opinion. After looking at it in consideration of your comment, I have to agree with you. Less background and either cropping or less distance to the model would bring more attention to her. (sorry for my bad english)
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