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  • fotographication 28/06/2020 16:31

    Hello Gabriel,
    you are showing a well assembles portrait and I very much like the high (black) top.
    Personally (!!!) I would have tried to backlight the girl a bit at the shoot and /or try to lighten it in post while - at the same time - reducing the lights in the bowl a bit.
    This is mainly because the hair obscures a part of her face and then I want to actually see (the dimensions of) the hair. 
    Also, (because for me it's a gorgeous portrait) it's not fit for printing - and I really would like to have it on the wall!
    Cheers
    Thilo

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APN Canon PowerShot SX510 HS
Objectif 4.3-129.0 mm
Ouverture 3.4
Temps de pose 1/80
Focale 4.3 mm
ISO 800