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Kate Fedorova

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Pour cette photo, Kate Fedorova désire collecter le maximum de commentaires constructifs Aidez-le avec des conseils sur la composition, la technique, le langage iconographique etc. (Veuillez respecter la Netiquette!)

Matthias Moritz 07/03/2020 9:57
I go with @dolphin-e .
I´d try to crop the photo, but would try a square format and get the person into the first third (Golden Ratio)
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J Oscar Sierra Echo 06/03/2020 16:39
On target by Dolphine, great shot.
Greetings.
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dolphin-e 06/03/2020 16:34
Katya, privet! This composition has everything to show the main idea. The curved figure of the old woman and the oversized broken shadows, as well as these horizontal lines at the bottom of the picture, which give the frame dynamics, all this works to achieve the desired result. Bravo!
P.S. In my opinion, the upper part of the plot is somewhat superfluous, you can crop it to a size of 20x25, and this will further enhance the emphasis.

Have a happy holiday!. Warm regards,
Sergey.
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