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Make-over

Make-over of a beautiful young woman who is sicncerely ill.

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  • dolphin-e 29/11/2019 22:30

    Martin, in my opinion, the face of model is too mutch covered with hair. Tilting the head and looking down would make this image more justified. 
    Regarding your logo appears, as Matthias said, it is a little bit too dominant. And he is right. 
    Have a nice week end. 
    Best regards, 
    Sergey.
  • Matthias Moritz 25/03/2019 9:56

    A fine portrait. Eye-catching.

    However, in my opinion your logo appears a little bit too dominant.

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APN NIKON D810
Objectif 85.0 mm f/1.4
Ouverture 9
Temps de pose 1/250
Focale 85.0 mm
ISO 320

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