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olaf-69


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Windmühle Spanien

Spanische Windmühle auf Mallorca

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  • Robert G. Mueller 13/11/2016 1:28

    I just see the EXIF data. :-) Typical thing using zoom lens. Try prime lense to work out your lens work:-)
    Robert
  • Robert G. Mueller 13/11/2016 1:24

    Nice picture and attempt also here. My first impression was, nice sky and nice contrast with the wind mill but why the frame is tilted? Lets talk about lens work Olaf. I feel you were concentrating not to cut off the wings of the mill so unexpected you move the camera and now the whole frame is tilted. Next time do not move the camera but move your self and take a deep breath as you have all the time in the world to make the picture right. Another issue i have is the fact that wind mills you can find everywhere in the world so there is nothing special at the end showing a windmill with the title that the same is in Spain. Now lets find out what makes this or better could make the image and the windmill special. Just frame in a way that you are working out in your composition what is the nice thing on it and how you could photograph it. Perhaps with different POV of DOF means selective sharpness or very abstract or subtle. What so ever its up to your creativity how you compose such picture. Only a blue sky with nice clouds and a dominant windmill does not makes it that interesting. Good luck to you! Robert

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APN ILCE-7M2
Objectif FE 28-70mm F3.5-5.6 OSS
Ouverture 9
Temps de pose 1/320
Focale 28.0 mm
ISO 100

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