In this life.... I loved you most of all
I used a different black and white conversion technique on this image to give it a more gritty feel to it. Wasn't sure if it works so that is why I placed it in the Critique section.
The ground slopes so I tried to use the large cross to determine straightness.
Honest critique welcome - straight and tough !
Check out Bill Fortney Blog Post; The train is leaving....
http://billfortney.com/?p=7078
“If you meet me, and forget me, you’ve lost nothing, if you meet God, and forget Him, you’ve lost everything!”
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| Section | Subjects: Critique - straight and tough |
| Vu de | 3 803 |
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| APN | NIKON D50 |
| Objectif | Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di LD Aspherical (IF) Macro (A09) |
| Ouverture | 4.5 |
| Temps de pose | 1/50 |
| Focale | 75.0 mm |
| ISO | 200 |
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Sergey Freeman 18/02/2013 13:46
Strong composition !Sabine DM 25/01/2013 17:16
Interessantes Foto!Susana Miguel 08/01/2013 18:39
Great story and for those of us who have already had to say goodbye to beloved ones it comes very close.I think you managed very well to show the sloping foreground and I like the way the background cross appears out of the mist, while the foreground silouttes lend an eerie, but at the same time comforting detail to the scene.
Great shot, Ken, I like it a lot!
Best regards,
Susana
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Susana Miguelciprianmd 03/01/2013 22:29
very nice ... and I like to play with fog :))Silvana W. 29/12/2012 22:07
Honestly, in this work I don,t see anything to criticize.. I love so**..I love atmosphere that unifies entire view*.It seems to me a very exciting work***regards
Glenn Capers 19/12/2012 17:52
a heartfelt view pointDRAGA PUC 15/12/2012 21:18
the foto is strong, the cross is almost haunting. iGood compo. I am not good at the critique, ken,I like your work, you know.draga
Elke N. 15/12/2012 9:18
That´s a great capture and a mystify mood I love - it´s a wonderful silhouette! Well done!Bye, Elke
Janos Gardonyi 15/12/2012 1:23
I think it's wonderful. Gorgeous, atmospheric photo. JanosHarold Thompson 14/12/2012 9:38
Brings back memories of the film medium time and the developing and printing and using high speed film to get this effect. Agree with Bryan about the trim off the bottom.:-)) HaroldSue Thompson 14/12/2012 9:17
The editing here really suits this rather sombre scene...imo :))
Well composed and the 'shadow' of the large cross is perfect and adds much to the scene.
:))
Dragomir Vukovic 14/12/2012 3:34
excellent !!!Elementa Luminis 13/12/2012 22:03
+++++BRYAN CRUTE 13/12/2012 19:48
I like the misty atmosphere and your conversion Ken, imho maybe reduce the black at the bottom by say half it kind of takes your eyes of the main part for me which is excellent?Wonder how others view it ?
Regards
Bryan
korol 13/12/2012 18:42
Branches of a tree on a background of fog look great.korol